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Eventide

A murder gathers in the branches overhead
Collective eye gleaming, watching, calculating
Raising a raucous cacophony as the winter rays lengthen,
Stretched thin and pale in the biting air
And shadows gather, dogging my steps and nipping my heels
As the bruised sky bleeds into the west

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beesandbrews
Jan. 5th, 2015 02:37 am (UTC)
Nifty! :-)
antesqueluz
Feb. 2nd, 2015 12:09 am (UTC)
Thank you!
dodger_sister
Jan. 5th, 2015 03:11 am (UTC)
Wow. What a picture this,paints! Lovely.
antesqueluz
Feb. 2nd, 2015 12:10 am (UTC)
Thanks so much!
owensheart
Jan. 5th, 2015 04:33 pm (UTC)
great poem, and the image of the crows in the tree really is vividly portrayed in this.
antesqueluz
Feb. 2nd, 2015 12:10 am (UTC)
Thank you! :-)
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